not all Caucasians are German.
not all Germans are Nazis.
im Caucasian but im not included in Hitlers group of ';perfect people';
he only wanted 100% Germans with blonde hair and blue eyes to rule.
im 13% German with chestnut hair and blue eyes.
so how come people connect all Caucasians to HitlerWhy do people relate all Caucasians to Adolf Hitler and the Nazis?
i don't know.
i'm ';aryan';-- both my parents are too, my grandfather was a member of the Nazi SS, so my family would have been considered part of the ';master race';, however that doesn't mean i'm a nazi.
my friends like to poke fun about it, and stuff... but sometimes i think they're serious. i've been told many (too many) times that i ';look like a nazi'; ... it isn't that great.
i guess some people are too ignorant to understand that ones looks or ethnicity really don't have anything to do with anything.Why do people relate all Caucasians to Adolf Hitler and the Nazis?
Not all Caucasian. but happens he was looking for a stereotype. the Ario麓s race. he thought the Ario's were the more pure people on earth and his researchers (geneticists and doctors) told him that arios people were White, tall, with blue eyes long nose, etc. he abducted several polish, and finish babies who had right the type for him and start sponsoring people to with this characteristics to have babies without being married or in loved, the funny thing is the original Arios are from India, brown skin, brown eyes, tall, and long nose. He was so wrong.!
I don't think they do think all Caucasians are Nazis..
By the way, how are you 13% German? I don't think you can be. You can be 12.5% of a nationality. Is there something different?
Like is your mom 1/16 %26amp; your dad 1/8 and the math comes out differently? What's the math?
Just wondering.
no one does that. German and hitler yes, but caucasian can be a dark skinned arab from iraq.
Hitler was pro aryan, he had brown hair himself, he thought nordics and germans and even persians were superior, hair colour was not as important.
Hmm- 13%, eh? How did you figure that one out?
Hitler only wanted pure German Aryans, so i doubt any rational person would group all Caucasians with Nazi's.
I don't think that. Plus being Caucasian covers a lot of ground, so I don't really relate being Caucasian to any given person.
I believe the word is Aryan. Caucasian isn't associated to the ';perfect people';, not to the same extent anyway.
I don't do that. And the people who do do that probably do it out of retaliation.
If you don't act like Hitler, I won't connect you to him. I've noticed that the people who complain about people saying they are racist, usually are. No one calls Whites who aren't racist, racist.
They probably just use Hitler as an exaggeration of Whites being racist.
probably the same reason people think that all black people are killers and drug dealers that have don't a clue who their father is.
people kinda blame white people for everything.
I never thought that nor do I hear people saying that.
No one does that. Whites are the only people who get a free pass on this stereotype.
Wow. I never heard of this. I don't relate them to that evil bastard
Friday, August 20, 2010
How do I delete people from connections and updates lists?
I have number of people I connected with by a blanket connect to all. I want to delete all of them and no longer use the connection featureHow do I delete people from connections and updates lists?
you delete people by turning of a switch by the side of the cpuwavy hair myspace pictures
you delete people by turning of a switch by the side of the cpu
What do you think of my Social Network Website Idea?
I have an idea for a social network. (like Myyearbook, Ibeatyou) It is called
';I'd Love To Be'; It is a social network where people who aspire to be something can connect. People go to the website and type in what they want to be ( a chef, kickboxer, artist, singer, etc). They are then given a profile page, in which they can customize. and at the top of everyone's profile it will read ';My name is _____ and I'd Love To Be A ________. On your profile page, you can upload videos, pictures, and communicate with other users. Lets say you want to be a professional chef. You can upload pictures of your recipes and even upload videos of you making a certain dish. On everyone's profile page, there will be a status bar that will tell other users how far you are in completing your goal of becoming a certain thing. Also, there will be a section where professionals can sign up. These are people who actually are what the users inspire to be. They can give tips to the users and communicate with them.What do you think of my Social Network Website Idea?
you made a mistake by sharing it here, i would like that website!What do you think of my Social Network Website Idea?
i think its a good idea, but it wont take off, there are so many people trying to make copycat sites, that your chances arent great
That's awesome. I'd be on it.
';I'd Love To Be'; It is a social network where people who aspire to be something can connect. People go to the website and type in what they want to be ( a chef, kickboxer, artist, singer, etc). They are then given a profile page, in which they can customize. and at the top of everyone's profile it will read ';My name is _____ and I'd Love To Be A ________. On your profile page, you can upload videos, pictures, and communicate with other users. Lets say you want to be a professional chef. You can upload pictures of your recipes and even upload videos of you making a certain dish. On everyone's profile page, there will be a status bar that will tell other users how far you are in completing your goal of becoming a certain thing. Also, there will be a section where professionals can sign up. These are people who actually are what the users inspire to be. They can give tips to the users and communicate with them.What do you think of my Social Network Website Idea?
you made a mistake by sharing it here, i would like that website!What do you think of my Social Network Website Idea?
i think its a good idea, but it wont take off, there are so many people trying to make copycat sites, that your chances arent great
That's awesome. I'd be on it.
How do I get rid of a virus that changes the results of a web search in yahoo or google?
Every time I use Yahoo or Google to search for something, the results that are displayed have the correct header (or preview), but the actual web address is wrong. For example, if i search for ';Facebook';, the blue link SAYS Facebook, and even has the correct ';Facebook is a social utility that connects people with friends and others who ... Facebook helps you connect and share with the people in ... Facebook 漏 2009 ...'; header.....but it actually takes me to www.surfwax.com. This happens for anything I search on, using any search engine.
I have tried to erase History, clear out Temp files;I ran Ad-Aware and Spypot, but it's still there. It's obviously some virus that I picked up somewhere, but how do it get rid of it?How do I get rid of a virus that changes the results of a web search in yahoo or google?
Try ';Avast!'; for your anti-virus needs:
http://www.avast.comHow do I get rid of a virus that changes the results of a web search in yahoo or google?
Keep your Ad-Aware and Spybot Search %26amp; Destroy. They are both very good programs. Avast is the best free AV solution available today, so you want that if you don't have an AV prog or no longer like the one you have. You also need a good software firewall in addition to a hardware one like comes in many routers. If your router has no firewall then replace it with one that does. I your router does have a firewall then change the password. All router ship with the same exact ';factory'; password which makes them so easy to get past. This is why it's a good idea to install a second layer of protection in software firewall in addition to the hardware one. Comodo Firewall is a good free one that you can get from here:
http://www.personalfirewall.comodo.com/
That said, there are mal-wares out there that have the ability to infest and disable your on-board anti-malware arsenal rendering them useless.
Therefore, it is a good idea to scan with at least one, preferably two on-line anti-malware scanners to make sure your on-board arsenal is OK before using it to scan your computer. This way you lower the risk of getting ';false negatives'; from your on-board arsenal.
As another answerer explained, you DO want to re-set System Restore. By getting a clean restore point _after_ you've cleaned up the infestation that now inhabits your computer you won't be able to re-infect it with System Restore.
Here are the two On-Line anti-malware scanners that I have trusted for many years:
http://support.f-secure.com/enu/home/ols鈥?/a>
and
http://www.pandasecurity.com/homeusers/s鈥?/a>
After you've downloaded and SAVE *zip* files of any progs you may want to add for protection run those two on-line scanners IN the order listed. If/when they find something wrong clean it up. Then UPDATE your existing on-board arsenal and KEEP it that way. Run it at LEAST once a week. I run mine on my Windoze computer every time I put it on the net.
If you find a program that you want to try and have or will download and save a zip of it you will want to install that program or programs with NO other progs running in the back ground. It's best to install progs in Safe Mode, but if you can't for whatever reason it can be done by going into MSCONFIG to shut them off. If you need help with this then contact me through here and I'll step you through the procedure.
I hope this helps. Good Luck! :)
To Remove Hijack Virus in you Computer First Use Manual steps to turn off or turn on System Restore
Steps to turn off System Restore
1. Click Start, right-click My Computer, and then click Properties.
2. In the System Properties dialog box, click the System Restore tab.
3. Click to select the Turn off System Restore check box. Or, click to select the Turn off System Restore on all drives check box.
4. Click OK.
5. When you receive the following message, click Yes to confirm that you want to turn off System Restore.
Then After Restart you Computer Safe Mode with Networking How To Restart? To get into the Windows Safe Mode with Networking computer is booting press and hold your ';F8 Key'; which should bring up the ';Windows Advanced Options Menu'; as shown below. Use your arrow keys to move to Safe Mode with Networking and press your Enter key. Then Download Update Use Malwarebytes' Anti-Malware Press This Link http://www.download.com/Malwarebytes-Ant鈥?/a>
Download and Scan Use Super Antispyware Press here http://www.superantispyware.com/
Download and Scan Use Norman Malware Cleaner Press here http://www.norman.com/Virus/Virus_remova鈥?/a>
Download and Scan Use SmitFraudFix v2.392 (WinXP, Win2K) Press this link http://siri.geekstogo.com/SmitfraudFix.p鈥?/a>
After Remove Hijack Virus Restart You Computer To Be Normal Then After Turn On System Restore.Steps to turn on System Restore
1. Click Start, right-click My Computer, and then click Properties.
2. In the System Properties dialog box, click the System Restore tab.
3. Click to clear the Turn off System Restore check box. Or, click the Turn off System Restore on all drives check box.
4. Click OK.
After a few moments, the System Properties dialog box closes.
Then Restart you Computer To Be Normal.
TDSS Trojan:
Check your system for a trojan called TDSSserv.sys which can prevent you from downloading and running security software.
start %26gt; run %26gt; type: devmgmt.msc %26gt; enter %26gt; view %26gt; show hidden devices %26gt; non-plug and play drivers %26gt; TDSSserv.sys %26gt; right click %26gt; disable %26gt; restart computer.
How to stop pop-ups and remove fake software, spyware, trojans and viruses:
Download, install, update and scan your computer with both Malwarebytes and SuperantiSpyware, delete anything they find, if this fails to completely remove the virus/spyware download then update Avast and run a boot scan (click schedule boot-time scan and restart your PC), all the software below is free and safe to use.
Malwarebytes: http://www.malwarebytes.org/mbam.php
SuperantiSpyware: http://www.superantispyware.com/
Avast Anti-Virus: http://www.avast.com/eng/avast_4_home.ht鈥?/a>
To protect your PC in the future you'll need to install anti-virus software and a firewall, id recommend using Avast and Comodo Pro firewall both are very effective and completely free, you should also switch to Firefox 3 if you are browsing with IE as its much safer and a lot easier to use. (links on my profile)
Malware Removal Guide For 2009:
http://remove-malware.com/antimalware-to鈥?/a>
I have tried to erase History, clear out Temp files;I ran Ad-Aware and Spypot, but it's still there. It's obviously some virus that I picked up somewhere, but how do it get rid of it?How do I get rid of a virus that changes the results of a web search in yahoo or google?
Try ';Avast!'; for your anti-virus needs:
http://www.avast.comHow do I get rid of a virus that changes the results of a web search in yahoo or google?
Keep your Ad-Aware and Spybot Search %26amp; Destroy. They are both very good programs. Avast is the best free AV solution available today, so you want that if you don't have an AV prog or no longer like the one you have. You also need a good software firewall in addition to a hardware one like comes in many routers. If your router has no firewall then replace it with one that does. I your router does have a firewall then change the password. All router ship with the same exact ';factory'; password which makes them so easy to get past. This is why it's a good idea to install a second layer of protection in software firewall in addition to the hardware one. Comodo Firewall is a good free one that you can get from here:
http://www.personalfirewall.comodo.com/
That said, there are mal-wares out there that have the ability to infest and disable your on-board anti-malware arsenal rendering them useless.
Therefore, it is a good idea to scan with at least one, preferably two on-line anti-malware scanners to make sure your on-board arsenal is OK before using it to scan your computer. This way you lower the risk of getting ';false negatives'; from your on-board arsenal.
As another answerer explained, you DO want to re-set System Restore. By getting a clean restore point _after_ you've cleaned up the infestation that now inhabits your computer you won't be able to re-infect it with System Restore.
Here are the two On-Line anti-malware scanners that I have trusted for many years:
http://support.f-secure.com/enu/home/ols鈥?/a>
and
http://www.pandasecurity.com/homeusers/s鈥?/a>
After you've downloaded and SAVE *zip* files of any progs you may want to add for protection run those two on-line scanners IN the order listed. If/when they find something wrong clean it up. Then UPDATE your existing on-board arsenal and KEEP it that way. Run it at LEAST once a week. I run mine on my Windoze computer every time I put it on the net.
If you find a program that you want to try and have or will download and save a zip of it you will want to install that program or programs with NO other progs running in the back ground. It's best to install progs in Safe Mode, but if you can't for whatever reason it can be done by going into MSCONFIG to shut them off. If you need help with this then contact me through here and I'll step you through the procedure.
I hope this helps. Good Luck! :)
To Remove Hijack Virus in you Computer First Use Manual steps to turn off or turn on System Restore
Steps to turn off System Restore
1. Click Start, right-click My Computer, and then click Properties.
2. In the System Properties dialog box, click the System Restore tab.
3. Click to select the Turn off System Restore check box. Or, click to select the Turn off System Restore on all drives check box.
4. Click OK.
5. When you receive the following message, click Yes to confirm that you want to turn off System Restore.
Then After Restart you Computer Safe Mode with Networking How To Restart? To get into the Windows Safe Mode with Networking computer is booting press and hold your ';F8 Key'; which should bring up the ';Windows Advanced Options Menu'; as shown below. Use your arrow keys to move to Safe Mode with Networking and press your Enter key. Then Download Update Use Malwarebytes' Anti-Malware Press This Link http://www.download.com/Malwarebytes-Ant鈥?/a>
Download and Scan Use Super Antispyware Press here http://www.superantispyware.com/
Download and Scan Use Norman Malware Cleaner Press here http://www.norman.com/Virus/Virus_remova鈥?/a>
Download and Scan Use SmitFraudFix v2.392 (WinXP, Win2K) Press this link http://siri.geekstogo.com/SmitfraudFix.p鈥?/a>
After Remove Hijack Virus Restart You Computer To Be Normal Then After Turn On System Restore.Steps to turn on System Restore
1. Click Start, right-click My Computer, and then click Properties.
2. In the System Properties dialog box, click the System Restore tab.
3. Click to clear the Turn off System Restore check box. Or, click the Turn off System Restore on all drives check box.
4. Click OK.
After a few moments, the System Properties dialog box closes.
Then Restart you Computer To Be Normal.
TDSS Trojan:
Check your system for a trojan called TDSSserv.sys which can prevent you from downloading and running security software.
start %26gt; run %26gt; type: devmgmt.msc %26gt; enter %26gt; view %26gt; show hidden devices %26gt; non-plug and play drivers %26gt; TDSSserv.sys %26gt; right click %26gt; disable %26gt; restart computer.
How to stop pop-ups and remove fake software, spyware, trojans and viruses:
Download, install, update and scan your computer with both Malwarebytes and SuperantiSpyware, delete anything they find, if this fails to completely remove the virus/spyware download then update Avast and run a boot scan (click schedule boot-time scan and restart your PC), all the software below is free and safe to use.
Malwarebytes: http://www.malwarebytes.org/mbam.php
SuperantiSpyware: http://www.superantispyware.com/
Avast Anti-Virus: http://www.avast.com/eng/avast_4_home.ht鈥?/a>
To protect your PC in the future you'll need to install anti-virus software and a firewall, id recommend using Avast and Comodo Pro firewall both are very effective and completely free, you should also switch to Firefox 3 if you are browsing with IE as its much safer and a lot easier to use. (links on my profile)
Malware Removal Guide For 2009:
http://remove-malware.com/antimalware-to鈥?/a>
How to host a server on a Mac?
I'm trying to host a Server on a Mac with my IP Address, how do I make people connect to the server? Is there a special hosting program for a Mac (other than programs like Hamachi), I'm also in a wireless connection. My server is a copy of RS2How to host a server on a Mac?
It really depends on what you want. What type of server are you looking for? Do you want to host a website? then you can use apache. If you want to host files then there are plenty of FTP available for Mac.
Also hosting a server on wifi is not a really good idea. It will reduce the speed and reliability of the server.
It really depends on what you want. What type of server are you looking for? Do you want to host a website? then you can use apache. If you want to host files then there are plenty of FTP available for Mac.
Also hosting a server on wifi is not a really good idea. It will reduce the speed and reliability of the server.
What do you think of making money just by talking about alternative energy systems for a home or automobile?
This is a theoretical question. I believe there are a lot of people who would like to do something to help the envoironment and make a positive contribution, but they don't know how they could afford to make a real tangible contribution. They are just struggling along financially themselves. Suppose you could join an ';Ecological-Network'; and have an opportunity to simply talk about viable alternatives in energy systems and lifestyle and make money when the people you talk to also join the Eco-Network? There are no minimum purchases, no inventory, no recurring monthly purchases, no financial obligations of any kind (I hate that kind of stuff). It would be simple....you join by purchasing a ';T'; shirt or ball cap, coffee mug, or bumperstickers (your choice). They all say something like...';I drive on Nuclear Fusion (Sun Power) Ask me how';. or, ';There are homes that use no fossil fuel for heating or cooling, ask me about it.'; When someone you spoke to joins, you get a referral fee. If they enroll someone, they get a referral fee and so do you, etc. through five levels of referrals. The ';T'; shirts, coffee mugs, ball caps, bumper stickers are all about alternative zero energy homes and electric cars and solar panels. There are companies who offer these alternatives to the public. The ';plot'; is to make these alternatives known to more people. When someone who joined the Eco-Network found someone who bought from one of the companies, that person and all his referres above him would get a ';finder's fee'; based on the value of the sale. You help connect people who are in a position to make a tangible difference in their purchases with an alternative product company. Does that sound like a concept that you think people would be interested in supporting? I just want some input on the ';idea'; the ';Eco-Network'; does not exist at this time. www.isomax-az.com has a start on this idea, but there are no ';T'; shirts, etc. available yet...it's just an idea...What do you think of the idea?What do you think of making money just by talking about alternative energy systems for a home or automobile?
Pyramid Scam... These are illegal. AmWay and all kinds of organizations got busted back in the 1980's on schemes like these. The whole idea is to promote the ranks so you get a percentage of the takes, but the whole idea is to get people to buy into ';Memberships'; or ';Brokers'; or some special unique rank that has to be paid, and then when you sign people under you, you get a small percentage of what they pay. I think the last one I heard was an insurance scheme like this where you could make a million dollars in seven years after getting enough people under you. The only people who really make the money are the ones at the very top, like the ones who start it.What do you think of making money just by talking about alternative energy systems for a home or automobile?
Alternative fuel is a joke. With all the alternative fuels added together they will not produce 1 million barrels per day...
Not for me. I just talk to people as the subject comes up on a casual basis; to exchange ideas.
That is like a pyramid or ponzi scheme. Illegal.
I'd like to ask why you wasted your time doing that...
there are several networks out there - permaculture, transition towns, LETS, food co-ops etc.
however there is no money in this. those that care and are developing solutions are generally not those with power (money) in the current system.
The solution to the industrial growth society is not though buying into a consumer led greenwash variation
for more positive options for the great turning to a life sustaining culture see http://www.greatturningtimes.org and http://www.joannamacy.net
also look out for the coming film ';the age of stupid'; http://www.ageofstupid.net/ - they even have tee shirts
Pyramid Scam... These are illegal. AmWay and all kinds of organizations got busted back in the 1980's on schemes like these. The whole idea is to promote the ranks so you get a percentage of the takes, but the whole idea is to get people to buy into ';Memberships'; or ';Brokers'; or some special unique rank that has to be paid, and then when you sign people under you, you get a small percentage of what they pay. I think the last one I heard was an insurance scheme like this where you could make a million dollars in seven years after getting enough people under you. The only people who really make the money are the ones at the very top, like the ones who start it.What do you think of making money just by talking about alternative energy systems for a home or automobile?
Alternative fuel is a joke. With all the alternative fuels added together they will not produce 1 million barrels per day...
Not for me. I just talk to people as the subject comes up on a casual basis; to exchange ideas.
That is like a pyramid or ponzi scheme. Illegal.
I'd like to ask why you wasted your time doing that...
there are several networks out there - permaculture, transition towns, LETS, food co-ops etc.
however there is no money in this. those that care and are developing solutions are generally not those with power (money) in the current system.
The solution to the industrial growth society is not though buying into a consumer led greenwash variation
for more positive options for the great turning to a life sustaining culture see http://www.greatturningtimes.org and http://www.joannamacy.net
also look out for the coming film ';the age of stupid'; http://www.ageofstupid.net/ - they even have tee shirts
Can anyone help with my essay?? Please Editing?
Lastly the media helps with the shaping of globalization. Magazines are one aspect of this. They influence people by telling them what is in and what is not. For example by saying in their magazine that wearing a certain article of clothing will make you fit in with the society around you many people will go out of their way to dress like they tell them to. Magazines play a role in the shaping of globalization. Television also contributes to aspects of globalization. By watching cooking shows you can watch how to make food from different cultures around the world. Doing this will help influence the way many families live and what traditions they have. Newspapers connect people and shape globalization. It can help you be connected to what is going on in the world around you. For an example of this is that you can say learn about wars in Afghanistan and be updated on it weekly, shaping globalization around you. In conclusion, the media helps in globalizing the world.
This is well the second last part to my essay i still need aconcluding paragraph but thank you! please. EddtingCan anyone help with my essay?? Please Editing?
What the heck, I'm bored...
I took the word ';you'; out of the essay- that shouldn't be used at all. And I just fixed some punctuation. You did very good though!
Lastly, the media helps with the shaping of globalization. Magazines are one aspect of this; they influence people by telling them what is popular and what is not. For example, by writing in their magazine that wearing a certain article of clothing will make one fit in with society, many people will go out of their way to dress in that particular style.
Television also contributes to aspects of globalization. Cooking shows often demonstrate how to make a variety of foods from around the world; this introduces many people to food dishes that they may never have heard of otherwise. This shows how a simple cooking program can educate people about world cultures. Newspapers connect people and shape globalization. It can help people connect to what is going on in the world. For example, one can learn about wars in Afghanistan and be updated on it daily, which brings the struggles of that nation closer to home. In conclusion, the media helps in making the world seem smaller.Can anyone help with my essay?? Please Editing?
put a comma next to ';Lastly';
next to the word ';dress'; change the word ';like'; to ';as if';
you have to revise the third to the last sentence
Your conclusion should just be a restating of your introduction with a specific reference to all of the points in your essay.
Here is the edited version:
Lastly, the media helps with the shaping of globalization. Magazines are only one aspect of this, because they influence people due to their content. The content of magazine will impact society in dramatic ways. Teenagers for example, will be hugely impacted by the influence of the media particular with respect to consumer purchases (clothing, music, food). Not only do magazines play a role in shaping globalization, but television also plays a role. For example, when watching a show on cooking, the viewer might be influenced in food preparation from different cultures around the world. This has other impacts on families that are far reaching. Newspapers and other forms of printed media also shape globalization, particularly due to their connectivity: we are only more connected if we are reading about the wars in Afghanistan and are updated weekly. All forms of media including newspapers, television and magazine media play a role in globalization.
comma after lastly. dont end a sentence in ';this'; put what ';this'; is (this type of media). Try not to start with they (different types of media). ';in'; what?. comma after for example. in whose magazine? *clothing will make you fit in with the society around you many people will go out of their way to dress like they tell them to.* this section is wordy... you may want to try *clothing will cause you fit in with people in high society, many people will go out of their way to dress according to these styles. *Magazines play a role in the shaping of globalization. * you dont actually need this sentence, so it makes it seem a little redundant of the first section. comma after cooking shows. change watch to see. change ';doing this'; ';to watching these shows';. How does watching cooking shows influence people, be specific. change ';For an example of this is that '; to For example, .
This is well the second last part to my essay i still need aconcluding paragraph but thank you! please. EddtingCan anyone help with my essay?? Please Editing?
What the heck, I'm bored...
I took the word ';you'; out of the essay- that shouldn't be used at all. And I just fixed some punctuation. You did very good though!
Lastly, the media helps with the shaping of globalization. Magazines are one aspect of this; they influence people by telling them what is popular and what is not. For example, by writing in their magazine that wearing a certain article of clothing will make one fit in with society, many people will go out of their way to dress in that particular style.
Television also contributes to aspects of globalization. Cooking shows often demonstrate how to make a variety of foods from around the world; this introduces many people to food dishes that they may never have heard of otherwise. This shows how a simple cooking program can educate people about world cultures. Newspapers connect people and shape globalization. It can help people connect to what is going on in the world. For example, one can learn about wars in Afghanistan and be updated on it daily, which brings the struggles of that nation closer to home. In conclusion, the media helps in making the world seem smaller.Can anyone help with my essay?? Please Editing?
put a comma next to ';Lastly';
next to the word ';dress'; change the word ';like'; to ';as if';
you have to revise the third to the last sentence
Your conclusion should just be a restating of your introduction with a specific reference to all of the points in your essay.
Here is the edited version:
Lastly, the media helps with the shaping of globalization. Magazines are only one aspect of this, because they influence people due to their content. The content of magazine will impact society in dramatic ways. Teenagers for example, will be hugely impacted by the influence of the media particular with respect to consumer purchases (clothing, music, food). Not only do magazines play a role in shaping globalization, but television also plays a role. For example, when watching a show on cooking, the viewer might be influenced in food preparation from different cultures around the world. This has other impacts on families that are far reaching. Newspapers and other forms of printed media also shape globalization, particularly due to their connectivity: we are only more connected if we are reading about the wars in Afghanistan and are updated weekly. All forms of media including newspapers, television and magazine media play a role in globalization.
comma after lastly. dont end a sentence in ';this'; put what ';this'; is (this type of media). Try not to start with they (different types of media). ';in'; what?. comma after for example. in whose magazine? *clothing will make you fit in with the society around you many people will go out of their way to dress like they tell them to.* this section is wordy... you may want to try *clothing will cause you fit in with people in high society, many people will go out of their way to dress according to these styles. *Magazines play a role in the shaping of globalization. * you dont actually need this sentence, so it makes it seem a little redundant of the first section. comma after cooking shows. change watch to see. change ';doing this'; ';to watching these shows';. How does watching cooking shows influence people, be specific. change ';For an example of this is that '; to For example, .
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